I
you
are
to be
as is
snowflake, light eyelash
marshmallow beams
a feather in forgetful wind
parachuting
reaching the vigor
like a gentle whisper
eyes wide of woolly,
floating search for haven
to bright up life
indifference
forever
my life, your life
royalty of dignity
applauded with marvel
charming as ever, delicate
decency welcomed
magic of the day
tarmac, cement, glass, fabric
airplane miles and with
window seat
craving
abundantly, excessively
your daze of rays
of light, lights
my light white, with
feathery existence
of how many?
concentration chips
eyes shut,
again at tranquility
and thrown into
arrival
like falling from the sky
drawn from a cloud
....and then
gradually dive in
watch, gaze
how many wasted ?
in elsewhere
life
from very first day
a zillion
on a breast
in slow motion
a hungry baby
suckles overtly
year after years
to bend and
to succumb
to last ever glance
through nightmare
absolute ignore
eats light
Wet gaze like in:
cease to oblivion
gliding to angel's arms open
here "you are safe now"
no words
to say
to this
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Fun contest taking one of old poems and using its words and making new but with totally different meaning. I took the words of The Very First Time and came up with this...maybe not a masterpiece but i'm proud and it was creative
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ADDED: (else)where, to, tarmac, cement, glass, fabric, 2xlife, search
COMBINED: in difference
NOT USED: an an
HUNGRY=CRAVING
DIGNITY=DECENCY
USED EVERY POINTS COMMAS WHATEVER THEY'RE CALLED
Well of Words
Word. Another. Joined between a feeling, a memory, a sense. Let it flow from within to sentences. Simple, sensible and truly something original. Written emotions on paper: a poem.
A Poem
Flashing by moment
a sense, feeling
that never comes
another
not to anyone
not to me
ever again
I grab to that glimpse
squeezing the sense
through feelings
eyes closed
forgotten in me
I hold back
and I let go
to paper
a sense, feeling
that never comes
another
not to anyone
not to me
ever again
I grab to that glimpse
squeezing the sense
through feelings
eyes closed
forgotten in me
I hold back
and I let go
to paper
The Poet In Me
Nice to see you here!
This is where my feelings and thoughts many times end up. More than twenty years ago I scribbled my first poems as 14 year old boy that was dreaming about being published author and poet.
Well, as usual, the poems never were sent to publisher and learning process was considered too hard - might have been different if there would have been internet then.
So I wrote occasionally less and less until last year when I decided to start writing for real since I had extra time. Started a blog and build some confidence. Finding All Poetry poetry society really made difference; more fellow poets and for the first time critique. And chance to read lots of good poetry
Now I am serious on writing and aim to improve to the lengths to make it for real. I am going to be published since I have a poet inside me and I intend to unleash it
This is where my feelings and thoughts many times end up. More than twenty years ago I scribbled my first poems as 14 year old boy that was dreaming about being published author and poet.
Well, as usual, the poems never were sent to publisher and learning process was considered too hard - might have been different if there would have been internet then.
So I wrote occasionally less and less until last year when I decided to start writing for real since I had extra time. Started a blog and build some confidence. Finding All Poetry poetry society really made difference; more fellow poets and for the first time critique. And chance to read lots of good poetry
Now I am serious on writing and aim to improve to the lengths to make it for real. I am going to be published since I have a poet inside me and I intend to unleash it
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